Becoming an Invader in a Fantasy Story

Layfon Drogo had the potential to be an interesting villain character of a story. But the writer discarded him as a tutorial enemy that any no name mob could have been...Now we're here. Being chosen as an Invader, we are bestowed the means and power to change this world. Whether we help it or watch it burn is our decision. Watch as we create and build our Dungeon to take over two worlds and amass our own harem of beauties along the way. What should have been the MC, we will take! XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX This story was originally called 'World of Alber'. I greatly enjoy my stories and will never drop them. However, I have to admit, this one was a little too slow paced. The idea was for it to be an experiment in slow building a story from the ground up. The problem is, while I enjoyed writing it, I want others to be able to enjoy it too. Plus, once we got to the village stage, I realized the plot was a little lack luster. So, I reinvented the story into something a little more fast-passed and interesting. I still intend to maintain the kingdom building, dungeons, summons, and other aspects that made up the core of Alber, but with an overall different plot/more developed plot. For anyone interested in the original, I have it saved in the auxiliary chapters and would love feedback. XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX If you like what I do and want to support me, I have both a ko-fi and Patreon account. No paywalls, just something for people to help support a guy that likes writing. Can also be used to make requests for a particular story or that I devote more of my time to a specific story. They’re pretty barebones right now; so, advice and tips would be appreciated. “https://ko-fi.com/nevermore101” “https://patreon.com/Nevermore101” Donations can lead toward changing my stories specifically how you want. But the main idea I had for this was to get a better idea of what people want from me. I have a lot of story ideas and right now I main the ones that seem the most popular - i.e. what gets the highest attendance during live. I only have so much time I can work on stuff, this seemed like a good way to get more feedback. I’m also on other sites. While I cross-post most of my work, feel free to check them out in their original setting over on Archive of Our Own and fiction.live. "https://archiveofourown.org/users/Nevermore101" “https://fiction.live/user/nevermore101” If you wanna talk to me directly, I have a Discord: (link pending, but I have the same username)